Wednesday, December 05, 2007

Cuentos del Ayer: El patito y el mono negro

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En una clase de español hace un montón de tiempo atrás me pusieron a escribir cuentos sobre cualquier cosa. Aquí les pongo uno de esos cuentos que hice. Por favor, me gustaría tu opinión para poder mejorar.

---Un patito estaba comprando bolsas plásticas en Pitusa hasta que un mono negro se parao por el lao y le dijo: “Pato, vete pa la cola que hay que hacer fila”. El patito se quedo mirando al mono pero el mono se le quedaba mirando bien serio. Dos días después una paloma cago encima de un carro estacionado en el parking de la escuela pero nadie dijo nada porque era día de los enamorados. Ese día me regalaron un corazón verde con unas paletas y un tostón relleno con carne. De momento el patito salio por la puerta de la escuela pa ver quien fue quien se compro las nuevas tenis de Jordan. Al salir pa la calle, el mono negro volvió y se pusieron a pelear por una nena que esta bien buena. La nena comoquiera termino saliendo con Junito que es un pana mío que es caco pero es un lambon. Siempre me he preguntado porque los labiosos se tumban a las nenas bien lindas. Yo siempre me tengo que conformar con las gorditas y las nenas con la cara to jodia de barritos. Tres meses después cerraron el Pitusa porque se les acabo el papel de toilet. El patito y el mono negro terminaron siendo amigos y se pasaban jugando Super Contra en casa de un cochinito azul. La nena se caso con Ronny Jarabe el senador popular pero se divorciaron porque el tipo era un loco. Hoy día la nena trabaja en Walgreens.---

27 comments:

Anonymous said...

ok... que carajo fue eso?

Anonymous said...

Q original!!!

Historia sin sentido, sin congruencia ni orden.

Manny said...

esto tiene sentido yo no tengo la culpa que no sepas leer jajaja mentira, perdon.. es tu opinion y la respeto...

Tendo said...

Manny ademas de dar opiniones, postularte para campa~as politicas y hablar sobre la vida... escribes cuentos!!! que mas sabes hacer?? cuando me case y mi esposa se pre~e por q ellas se pre~an solas y ellas tienen la culpa de los embarazos.. no uno, le voy a leer tus cuentos a el bebe cuando este en la barriga...

Manny said...

tendo, tambien se hacer perritos con globos como los payasos jajaja mentiras... gracias tendo, espero que mis cuentos hayan de tu bebe uno con fuerza y ganas de mamar teta

crazygirl said...

manny mi pregunta es: que tienes en contra de la mujeres gordas jaja
imaginate si nosotras despreciaramos o nos CONFORMARAMOS con los HOMBRES GORDITOS muchos de uds. estarian solos no crees?
open your mind¡¡¡¡¡¡

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